by chicago Mar 17, 2008
category :
Love, romance /
secret love
The next night came the time is near how do i tell my best friend that im in love with her, you dont someone told me let her find out on her on. what about our friendship so much is at risk. not knowing if u felt the sameway as i. some people say that if yot date a friend your friendship wont last. but the love i had for you was more them a simple crush. i am willing to gave up everything i have for you. betrayal is what you feel deep down in your your heart. how could you not not tell me that you were in love with me? all this time i thought you were my friend but your just like everyone else she said. i told you everything there is to know about me and you turn around in tell tell me this. how do i take all this in? chicago you are the best friend that any girl could have and i admit that i do love u to. but i dont know how to deal with you and h****, and what about j***** and them other girls how would they feel. i dont know but what i do know is that i love you in you love me,thats what matter. |
by Diz
This is really good - your expression of your feelings are evident, you paint the scene and the emotions where the reader can and will be in that place.....it's very good. :-) |