Lasting Love

by Brittany C   Mar 17, 2008


*I wrote this one for a friend*

She loves him with all heart
every beet it of it is all for him.
Safe loved wanted and needed.
Oh god he makes her feel all
of these things so strongly.

He loves her so much
everything about her.
Her eyes so full of love
a deep luminous brown
her soft hair that shins like stars.

They bring out the very
best in each other.
They may even bring
out the worst sometimes.
But their love is strong
and will always last.

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  • 17 years ago

    by noha

    Beautiful, sweet one great jop and nice flow5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Beautiful Forever

    I really like how this poem was dedicated to a friend. The way it was written even shows how much you care about them. I really enjoyed this poem because it's kind of a easily relate-able concept, but the way you wrote it held my attention. It was a very enjoyable read... 5/5