Short-term Memory

by Beautiful Forever   Mar 17, 2008


Sometimes I feel alone and then-
Oh no, I've lost my thoughts again,
I was just walking over there-
Huh?, I was just thinking I swear,

Maybe if I would just-
I guess theres no one I can trust,
Even myself because I-
What was I thinking? *sigh*,

Where am I? Who are-
This is all so bizzare,
One minute I'm here-
Will anything ever be clear?,

I'm tired of not knowing-
Why are my tears showing?,
I guess I'll never-
Have my memories... forever.

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  • 16 years ago

    by checkerboard

    I really like this poem... it remind me of myself..lol. i give u a 5!! keep up the good work.

  • 16 years ago

    by Live WeLL

    This is a really interesting poem.. at first I thought it was really funny and I enjoyed reading it.. but the ending is actually really sad...

    I guess I'll never-
    Have my memories... forever.

    It is a sad thing to now be able to hold certain memories.. it might be good to forget sad ones but it's heartbreaking just to know that some people really experience this and can't remember stuff.

    Nice poem though. Good flow.. nice style and I like the topic. Very unique. Keep it up and thanks for the comment! =)

  • 16 years ago

    by noha

    Nice work, i try to do it before in mine callend all in my head , its alot of thoughts and words come out to your mind and beautiful way to write i always love new things ,noha

  • 16 years ago

    by Brandon Lee

    Haha, I thought it was a bit comical.
    It was well written and unique. Good Job.

  • 16 years ago

    by sweet escape

    It is good. the name fits it very well....lol