I liked this one alot. It reminds me of my momorie only it's not that bad;) i liked the wat that it was formated and the word choice. 5/5

This is very different, but good different! I like the subject you wrote about and you did a very nice job!

It is good. the name fits it very well....lol

Haha, I thought it was a bit comical.
It was well written and unique. Good Job.

Nice work, i try to do it before in mine callend all in my head , its alot of thoughts and words come out to your mind and beautiful way to write i always love new things ,noha

This is a really interesting poem.. at first I thought it was really funny and I enjoyed reading it.. but the ending is actually really sad...

I guess I'll never-
Have my memories... forever.

It is a sad thing to now be able to hold certain memories.. it might be good to forget sad ones but it's heartbreaking just to know that some people really experience this and can't remember stuff.

Nice poem though. Good flow.. nice style and I like the topic. Very unique. Keep it up and thanks for the comment! =)

I really like this poem... it remind me of myself..lol. i give u a 5!! keep up the good work.