Aw cute cute cute!! i loved it i mean it was prefecectly worded and the rhymed pulled it together 5/5 hope it lasts : )

Guide me throughout this whole week,
For without you I am very weak.

The use of "weak" and "week" threw the flow off for me. Other than that this was an amazing piece that just filled me with love. The emotions were real and true. The flow was flawless until the last two lines. Well done *5/5*

Very nice poem, emotions well stated.

This poem has such an amazing flow and rhythm to it, I absolutely love that.

It was small, and it somehow seemed there could be more to it, but at the same time there couldn't. More as if there's something hidden that won't be let out? Even though, I'm sure that's not the case with this. Maybe there was just a little lack of emotion or something in the middle of the poem.

I'm not quite sure, but it's an amazing poem and you surely deserve a 5/5 on it. (:

Keep it up, dear.

Aw cute poem really liked it i really do.=)

I loved it. It was a great read and easy to relate to. It had a nice flow and great word choice. I gave it a 5/5

Aww!.it's really beautiful!!!..i love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!.......i want my guy to whisper in my ear!!...aww...i can totaly feel ur emotion......keep writting.ur great at it!
*******aLy********

So perfectly written.
i love this so much.
5/5
keep it up.
kelsey xx

Amazing bravo. It was a great read and I enjoyed it emensly. Keep it going.

Keep me in your thoughts and prayers,
`I feel like there should be another word in that line to make the beginning flow better.

Say that I'm the key to your door,
`It sounds better to me when I replace it with "I am" instead of "I'm."

Guide me throughout this whole week,
For without you I am very weak.
`That rhyme just ruined it for me -- and it makes for a weak ending, and in such a short poem, it kind of smashes it for me.

Overall, I feel like it's emotional, but the word choice and diction isn't quite as strong. Again, work a little with your syllabication.

..__MiNDYY

I like this poem. It's so cute. But has a true meaning. =]]

I like it

Simple and too the point, my desired style. good use of the word whisper and i long for the same from my loved one. keep writing.

I really like this one. i could really understand how you felt.
i hope i can write as good as you one day.

keep it up!

Awe, a very beatiful write. I can relate to it a lot. And there's definitely a lot of emotions in this piece that you expressed clearly and deeply. A heartfelt write, an enjoyable read. 5/5.

I really like this poem... its sweet and caring...
the only thing i thought could be better is the stanza

"Keep me in your thoughts and prayers,
Since I know how much you care."

it would sound better to me if it said somethinng like "let me know how much you care"
the "since" kinda throws it off for me...

But altogether a good job... :)

XxAshleyxX

This is really sweet :)

I loved this poem. I know the feeling of wishing for someone to say those words... I just felt the poem. Every emotion...
Great Write
Emma 5/5

This is quite amazing
i love it :)

Very beautiful.

I loved it.

5/5

Great work :)

xx