You and only you

by David   Mar 17, 2008


Your loved by so many people,
I really can see how,
If only there was a single chance,
That I might make it in somehow.

There are many people out there,
Male and female alike,
You are the one my hearts chosen,
To follow forever in the night.

You see so many people,
You see them for who they are,
You want to help these people,
You are willing to travel so far.

You help me keep on breathing,
For this I thank you now,
I want to carry on sheathing,
you help me carry on breathing.

Your loved by me as a person,
I want you whole and true,
you've inspired the rest of my life,
As if there was only me and you.

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  • 15 years ago

    by Dreamofolwin

    I LOVED reading this...A lovely poem of love. Wonderfully expressed :)

    Good job!
    Olwin.

  • 15 years ago

    by Nobodys Hero

    Your very good at this kind of poetry =] another beautiful job.

    The way you portray yourself with your words proves that your a caring and loving person, very good job!

    The flow was good once again and you wrote the overall piece very well

  • 16 years ago

    by FiguringThisOutAsIGo

    Omg, this was so good and so sweet and so perfect that im sitting here trying to figure out the right words to say to how amazing that was. gr8 job
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Unamed

    Aw!..this was really really sweet!!!!...i totaly loved this one!!!!!!!...
    "There are many people out there,
    Male and female alike,
    You are the one my hearts chosen,
    To follow forever in the night"
    ^^ very nice!!..specially the last two lines, that is very sweet. it shows that our hearts choose who we want to be with, not we chose!..

    "Your loved by me as a person,
    I want you whole and true,
    you've inspired the rest of my life,
    As if there was only me and you"
    ^^that is also very sweet! it shows that love is unconditional, that it doesnt matter who you are. they love u for who u r.
    i specially love the last line...it was a great way to end the poem...very sweet and emotional!!!...hehe.. very romantical.!
    lol
    Aly
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Jackie

    A good poem, you wear your heart on your sleeve, 5/5

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