What is life

by Love vs Fate   Mar 17, 2008


What is life,
what is it that keeps me going,
am i here or just a flowing.

while I'm laying here tonight,
i look up into to the stars tonight,

so much beauty in which i see.
i wouldn't give this moment up,

life has its paths that in our time of ours, we must choose.
life has many obstacles that we much cross,
but don't worry...we know right from wrong,

we must choose our destiny,
our path
our life.

we are the ones that can make it right!

i once tried telling people this but they only ignored me.
i try and try to get a message out to people to let them know, that when your in a hard time in life, just dont give up. i almost gave up on my life and if i had done so, i wouldnt be where i am now. i would be a nobody.

but you can make someone of yourself. so please, who ever reads this poem, always remember...dont give up, keep moving forward!!

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  • 16 years ago

    by Sammerz

    Oh big brother o big brother the way you use your words gots ppl always coming to read and comment and rate your poems...
    LOvely job!!!!
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by MyMuse

    Me believe, yes? does that count lol. well you know another touching poem, this one is just plain amazing TRAVIS!! I will always want to read your poetry and still love you :D<33

    Sorry i just been dazed latly -.- But i still LOVE YOU FOREVER..!!!<3

    CourtneyxHolland
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