Promises

by Brittany C   Mar 17, 2008


We have made so many promises.
That I hope we both will keep.
I love the idea of those promises.
I want to see them come true.

I love you baby; you make me so happy.
That I do promise to you so gladly.
I want you in my arms so badly.
My heart aches for you happily.

You make so many beautiful promises.
I hope you truly mean them.
Each and everyone of them.
They have came to mean the world to me.

I never want you to leave my side.
When you are gone I will miss you.
I just want you come back to my arms.
To hold close and never let go.

We will promise to each other
that we truly love one another.
You promise that this will last forever.
Even when we are long gone.

The promises you have made are many.
I trust every word you have spoken fully.
We can only hope that our love will last.
Through the hard times a head of us.

Promises spoken from the heart.
Are promises I will always keep close.
Because my heart is yours completely.
Never will I love someone as I love you.

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  • 16 years ago

    by SashaMirage

    Wow the love and emotion put behind this poem deserves a 1000 5/5 votes. It feels so good to be that much inlove and building all your dreams on the promise of a new love. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Crystal Gaze

    I enjoyed readings, this and I felt that the concept was touching.
    But like tara kay said^ it seems like your trying to hard to ryhme..and it's throwing me off a little.
    I just felt like this piece was forced, when it should just flow from your heart.
    Still a good read. 4,5

    X Paula

  • 16 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    I like how you try so hard to rhyme, but it doesnt work too well, you're trying to hard, just open yiur heart, release all your emotion, and don't care about rhyming too much.

  • 16 years ago

    by noha

    I realy love this part:We will promise to each other
    that we truly love one another.
    You promise that this will last forever.
    good work , keep it up