by Sarah Mar 17, 2008
category :
Dark, fantasy /
other
Murderous Intentions, People Say She's Fine. |
by T
Oh, this was a very dark poem, what a heavy read. Because of this I can honestly say this poem has had a huge impact. Her isolation is felt but I dont actually feel sorry for her- your imagery has created a deeply sinister character. I dont know if this was your angle but it is the impression that I am left with. It leaves the reader with a sense of fear. Superbly written piece. Keep it up. |
by Jackie
Great poem, very good imagery 5/5 |