I never wanted

by kristine   Mar 18, 2008


I look at your face
I see the problem that you have.

Deep into your eyes
I see the pain and the agony.

I look at your lips
I see the mask that you wear
The counterfeit that
I never wanted to see.

This moment that
I never wanted to happen
This moment that I never ever wish

How can I help you?
How could I wish I'll be at your side?
How can I force myself not to love you?

My brain is waterless,
My heart is wither in you're presence
I don't want to see you that moment
Cause my soul is melting
My heart is crying in hell

I succumb to the battle
Of Love
That I know I never ever win.
I want to be selfish person, cause??
I want you to be mine
I thought you have feeling for me.
I take a granted to your love.
I'm crying in the cave
The echoes of suffering bouncing
into my soul.

My soul is tired
I hopeless to everything

PLEASE HELP ME GOD!!!

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  • 16 years ago

    by Mister 47

    Like i said, before , if you want a good flow and good peom , you msut give the reader a light good way to understadn your feelings,

    ina good way ,
    i would my self advice you to follow my previous advices of the otyher poems , adn wrok hard to make rhymes and pargraphs and structure , good ,
    you ahev some 2 lines some 10 lines, some 1 line ,

    not good one ,
    i hope you see what i mean !!
    a fair one

  • 16 years ago

    by An Angel in the Darkness

    I agree with the above statement it is a really good poem but strange flow. But when has sorrow ever been normal? Really good keep up the great work.

  • 16 years ago

    by slowlyxfallingxapart

    It's good but I don't know, the flow is a little wierd..Just my opinion. I like it though. Good work :)

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