When will come the Day??

Again beautifully written.. excellent

What a very sad piece you have penned. The pain can be felt in the words you have written.

when will come the day when my heart would stop Missing you..
will it be the day when it would stop beating

These lines are very heartfelt.
Good job!
Take Care Cindy

Wow this is amazing it blew my mind away i agree with jarred i hate waiting for something good to go right im such a good person and all i get in life is hell and bullshit from my friends and others so u no what u prolly have a huge heart and i hope that one day someone will see it and be blessed to have u in there life hunn u r amazing and dont evre change for a guy or anyone no man is worth ur tears and when u find the right one he deff wont make u cry

Hey =] great poem. I lvoe the way you've used unanswerable questions and answered them with another question, t'is often how love and hurt works =] love it. easy 5!

Matt
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Good poem.but in the words of Keats:

Here but to think is to be full of sorrow

So we should try to find out pleasures out of pain and suffering.Only then we enjoy our life.