Wanting you
by Sweet Little Lie Mar 18, 2008
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I see your face, I feel your touch, you look deep into my eyes, into my heart, my soul, I love how I feel in your arms, you tell me you love me, between soft kisses, that linger on my lips. I want so badly, to feel my hand in yours, you know me so well, you can hear what I'm thinking, I wait to hear those words, for you to say I love you, but this is all a dream, I don't want to wake up. What do I have to do, because the tallest mountain I'd climb, to keep you here with me, in this moment forever, because God made you so perfect! |
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16 years ago
Great write another foreshadowing of where i beleive your talent will take you nice job - raindrops 5/5
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16 years ago
by Mike Martin
I really like it....i feel the special feeling in it......great job....5/5......xoxo
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16 years ago
This is like a story...
Or maybe that's the way it is...
I really love your writing style, various
Another cute one,
5/5 for this poem!!! -
16 years ago
This is such a beautiful poem, but like the one before, the structure isn't as good. If you want help fixing it, PM and I'll be gladly to help you out. Great poem though. 5/5
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16 years ago
by noha
Okay you still got nice work bt i suggest to write it in lines it will be better and make words more flow
