That is very very deep i love it!

Okay you still got nice work bt i suggest to write it in lines it will be better and make words more flow

This is such a beautiful poem, but like the one before, the structure isn't as good. If you want help fixing it, PM and I'll be gladly to help you out. Great poem though. 5/5

.:CiNdY:.

This is like a story...
Or maybe that's the way it is...
I really love your writing style, various
Another cute one,
5/5 for this poem!!!

I really like it....i feel the special feeling in it......great job....5/5......xoxo

Great write another foreshadowing of where i beleive your talent will take you nice job - raindrops 5/5