I really love this poem andrew. so many words that are great in describing what you want us to see in your poem. i just almost picture the scene running in my head as i read your poem. your very good at it ^.^ 10/10!

I really like this one 2 u can really c it happening
sorry if this is what u have been through it must have hurt
x

Andy,

Another superb write from yourself.

You are truly a gifted individual. The way you structure and paint such vivid scenes within it is incredible.

This write takes the reader on your journey of lost love. It is rather like a rollercoaster ride with highs and lows, but this one send you crashing down into the sea below!!

Well done Andy. I was just wondering whether you have tried writing a novel? Or maybe, a short story?

Michael