by Deathcanwait
Dude tha's sad =[ love some of the words you use though =] like "ambiant melodies losing there way". Love it =]! easy 5. |
Very sad poem. The words you used were not just plain words but big creative words. |
by Gizmo
Three gunshots broke my concentration, |
by Blissful
Oh my this was truly amazing! The emotions were so deep and haunting that I got chills while reading this. Your choice of words here truly blew me away and I was left in awe. The flow was flawless and the thought behind it was real. You truly brought everything to life for me and I could clearly imagine everything clearly in my mind. The final stanza was flawless and a great way to end this amazing piece. Well done .. I truly enjoyed reading this dark and heartbreaking piece. *5/5* |
I've watched the world falling away, |
by JAYJ
I almost cryed ive been in that room before thanx for writing this one was my first favorite...its very deep |
by Candy 3y3s
Wow...the words are soo deep! Keep it up=] |
by Lu
You have used some really amazing word usage in this piece .... |