Lonely

by Norman John Henry Campbell   Mar 18, 2008


30/10/2006

Does anyone notice,
The pain in your life?
Do they see the death,
In your eyes.

Does anyone care that you walk
Half and half? If I had the guts
To put this gun to my head
And does anyone notice?
And does anyone care?

Would it matter if I were dead?
Would anyone care and would
Anyone notice?

If I had the guts to pull this trigger,
I would end the pain.
No-one notices the emptiness in your eyes.
So I must pull this trigger.

There’s no room in this world!
Is there any room in the next?
Maybe someone would notice
Maybe someone would care
But it’s too late now.

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  • 16 years ago

    by girlnextdoor

    "If I had the guts to pull this trigger,
    I would end the pain."
    Beautiful, one of my favourite poems so far on this site.

  • 16 years ago

    by Deathcanwait

    Dude tha's sad =[ i like the lines:
    "There's no room in this world!
    Is there any room in the next?"
    People say this worlds crap without normally thinkin about whether the next will be any better. i like =] rated 5.

    Matt x

    Keep hope.