Comments : The ghost of you

  • 16 years ago

    by Kate Hicks

    You've described your situation beautifuly. These ghosts just haunt us for ever don't they.

  • 16 years ago

    by MusoXDanielle

    I can compleately relate to this poem!!

    OMG! Work of art... love this!

    Well done

    5/5
    Danielle
    xx

  • 16 years ago

    by Sarah

    A very nice & emotional poem...I love it 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    A piece many can relate to. I especially love the last stanza. What a powerful wat to end this poem. Good job.

  • 16 years ago

    by Lindsey

    Agh this is so amazing!
    keep it up!

  • 16 years ago

    by Tom Swart

    I think I have seen that ghost in my own poems once or twice. Good write, I always enjoy reading your works. peace

  • 16 years ago

    by Cindy

    I am so glad I stopped and read this poem.

    When somethings apart of your daily life
    then suddenly taken away
    the memories of the past seem to come alive
    with the awaking of every day

    These words really hit home with me. When we lose someone we care dearly for the memoriesd always linger.

    the ghost of you will never leave
    its trapped forever in my mind
    the ghost of me, has it been freed
    or is it trapped with you in time?

    This stanza is so beautiful and heartfelt. It sums up the entire piece.
    Great job!
    Take Care Cindy