Dear, why so sad? don't loose hope. It is so miserable to read, but i really like the last 2 stanzas, they are my favorite. i wrote a response poem for your last line.

Wow...
I admire your writing skills. You left me in awe with this piece and I am truly speechless in a way.
There are only a few of poets that can convey such beauty and sorrow within their poems. Fantastic first stanza pulled me in and the whole poem took me to another world, a world filled with deeply touching emotions. I can relate to this piece in a way which makes it even more powerful for me. Every stanza holds amazing details which took my breath away.
I have only two suggestions: I think that you should capitalize letters in the beginnings of some lines; in the line " and we are sheltered inside nowhere" I think it should be "and we are sheltered inside OF nowhere".
Overall, this piece is brilliantly written. I can't pick my favorite part because there are too many flawless lines.
Keep writing and I'll keep reading your remarkable work!

Again good word choice...

"what happens to love when true lovers fail?
what becomes of light when all the shadows prevail?".. good question.. :)

"a hard skin keeps its love, unable to bust open.
raindrops fall and beat us down,
lovers search for love no longer found,
and lonely hearts die.
we leave behind a withered rose, dreaming of dreams long forgotten. "

^^ aww this is so touching.. so beautifully written...

keep writing..