What You Have Become

by Mackenzie   Mar 18, 2008


Sweetie, Sweetie,
Look at yourself,
Just Look,
At what you have become.

Your not the friend
I used to know,
the one i trusted,
and loved.

I'm scared of the person that you now are.
You never smoked, nor cut nor cussed
and now.. now, I know the true you
that does all of the above.

How do I know these things?
The scars are but a tiny clue.
You admitted yo smoking 3 times.
Something you used to would never do.

Sweetie, Sweetie,
If your mom and dad only knew.
They wouldn't believe what their little girl
Has become.

Do you not see you're hurting yourself,
and the others all around?
Your the one that in the middle of the night
That I am worried all about.

Seeing you now,
Kills me to know...
This person you have become
is the same person you were before.

You can blame it on depression,
Yea I bet it sure is tough...
But I know the people you're hanging with.
They are pretty darn rough.

Sweetie, Sweetie,
I love you to death.
But the truth is..
I hate what you have become.

**This is true. i have a *friend*.. she is really worrying me. thanks for taking the time to read this. If you have any suggestions/comments/critism... it's all greatly appreciated.**

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  • 16 years ago

    by LadzOfSoul

    Great poem... shows your emotion...

    keep it up.

  • 16 years ago

    by desiree

    Great poem.

    I can relate; friends are chaning totally.
    Just talk to them about it.

    5/5