by JOHNATHAN Mar 18, 2008
category :
Life, society /
meaning of life
This is not a Game |
I like the way this develops, but there's something about the way it ends that says "lashing out" rather than "standing strong", and I think age may be the reason I'm thinking this. You know what I'm saying? Classy. |
I really like this poem! so much passion, it really hit me hard. 5/5 |