Comments : THIS IS NOT A GAME

  • 16 years ago

    by MeltInHisArms

    I really like this poem! so much passion, it really hit me hard. 5/5
    xoxo
    ~me~

  • 16 years ago

    by Ed or Ian Henderson

    I like the way this develops, but there's something about the way it ends that says "lashing out" rather than "standing strong", and I think age may be the reason I'm thinking this. You know what I'm saying? Classy.