Comments : Spill!

  • 16 years ago

    by Cotton Candy Clouds

    I like this poem
    it was written with such a mature tone it was refreshing to read : ) i like the way you described everything and i loved the ending with the line
    " i guess the reaper wasn't standing that near"
    5/5 <33

  • 16 years ago

    by Evee Taylor

    Ooo wow, having had 3 accidents all resulting in whiplash and one very nearly my life- it hits a cord

  • 16 years ago

    by Kelly

    I really enjoy your writing,
    'Stepping out of a wreck with a twinge in yer neck,
    I guess the Reaper wasn't standing that near. '
    I really enjoy opening your poems to see what you have written i think you are very talented with a unique style.

    Kelly
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