I need 2 know

by Quintarae   Mar 18, 2008


If you can't get someone out of your head...

maybe they're suppose 2 be there.
i love you, but you act like you don't even care;
i don't want to love you, but its not a choice:
i just can't ignore that little voice, that whispers your name in my ear.
why can't you get close to me? is it because of fear?
"a fear of what?"

a fear of letting someone get to close;
can you answer these questions, "why?"

because i really need to know

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  • 16 years ago

    by Faithless Watermelon

    Lacks a definite structure but i like how its seems to ramble and demand answers, as in desperation. i have an odd taste i guess, but good job anyways :P

  • 16 years ago

    by noha

    Its beautiful way to write and you got the talent and soon you will get better,as every day we learn more, i love the feeling behind this words and so keep write

  • 16 years ago

    by CWG

    Great Job! 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Faithless Watermelon

    It may not be classified as a poem to some rigid jackasses, but i like it. it does have some sort or rhythm, and it carries itself quite fluently fiv out of fiv. =P

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