Wow! that is really good...i just broke up w/ my bf so it made me cry! *sniff*
it was so good. I totally get wut it means...
5/5

Nice work aly , beautiful words, and great feeling, great jop , keep in your love , and keep in your write,5/5

With a brush of his lips to my hair,
it makes it that more special.
His hand slowly lifts to brush my hair with his hands.
His light fingertips slowly brush my bangs away,
as i look deep into his eyes.

Wow, I really adore that stanza. Very well written, catchy and unique. I really love your wordage too. Pretty great one, keep writing!!!
5/5 for sure!!!

This was a really good poem. Although it wasn't written that great. And you mis-spelled "make" in the one line. The flow was really good and concept was absolutely beautiful! I really liked the feeling this poem gave me as I read it :)