Her

by Linzi x   Mar 19, 2008


Childish play but picture perfect,
the age, the mind it matters,
the flirtatious way,by hypnotizing eyes,
the darkness of each strand
is overruled by the bright glare
she loves but loathes a cheeky grin
we care for who she is.

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  • 16 years ago

    by robin milford

    This is a cute short poem that flows very well. good job

  • 16 years ago

    by Anonymous Angel

    Hey,
    I think its a great poem but short.
    For me it doesn't matter if a poem rhymes, what does matter to me is,the flow.
    which is in your case good, you did a great job 5/5
    kisses stephanie

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