Your love

by Andrew   Mar 19, 2008


You love is like a lantern that light my way, it brightens my life in a way i can never say, joy and happiness forever will be in my days. Your love is so precious, pure and true with each new day, it lies deep in my heart in a way you can never know, it lies so much deeper than the eyes can see. Your love can never be measured, all i know is that it will forever be treasured. Whenever am with you my emotions are freed, having these feeling always is special indeed. You are the one i need to always be beside me, whisper in each others ears our commitment to this love, to show me that you care and will always be there.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Sandra D

    Wow. i love your vocab, and it;s pretty much just amazing. this has to be one of my favorite poems, great job.
    the only thing is that i think you should maybe put it into stanzas... but its still amazinf just the way it is
    5/5

    -->Sandra

  • 16 years ago

    by Valiantpenguin

    This is very sweet and pretty good. keep it up 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Andy

    I really like the way you written your poem!
    11/10!