by Andrew Mar 19, 2008
category :
Love, romance /
love is
You love is like a lantern that light my way, it brightens my life in a way i can never say, joy and happiness forever will be in my days. Your love is so precious, pure and true with each new day, it lies deep in my heart in a way you can never know, it lies so much deeper than the eyes can see. Your love can never be measured, all i know is that it will forever be treasured. Whenever am with you my emotions are freed, having these feeling always is special indeed. You are the one i need to always be beside me, whisper in each others ears our commitment to this love, to show me that you care and will always be there. |
by Sandra D
Wow. i love your vocab, and it;s pretty much just amazing. this has to be one of my favorite poems, great job. |
This is very sweet and pretty good. keep it up 5/5 |
by Andy
I really like the way you written your poem! |