by BlueEyedMystery Mar 19, 2008
category :
Dark, fantasy /
dark, horror
I'm staring down the barrel of this gun |
by Bob
WOW!! that was....different but great. |
by Gabrielle
Very well writen, I liked it a lot 5/5 |
by Morgana
I like it a lot, very beautiful in its own way but maybe that's just me? anyway I have given it 5 cause it works really well. |
by LiNa
Great poem liked it alot, very simple. |
by Alvaro
Your last stanzas alway get to me, this was a unique poem for the one worded stanzas you gave it, it made the poem whole as simple as i can say it is. a little bit cliche in some parts but again hypnotized by words i cant really find many flaws |