Interesting piece, I honestly enjoyed in it but I must say that I don't understand every part of your topic. Very original work, you expressed emotions on a good way, you made a whole picture of this piece very colorful and deep.
Tone of this poem makes it easy for reading. I like your opening lines, they are very captivating and creative. Only line that truly threw me off is third line of last stanza, cause it somehow doesn't fit in my mind. Ending is also very effective and every stanza constructs a compact, very emotional poem written straight from the heart.
Bravo!