by Tony Rifas Mar 19, 2008
category :
Life, society /
inspirational
I saw a man get shot today, my blood started to race |
by Cara
Awesome. i absoulutely love your stuff. i love the vulture concept. the way you write realli intrigues me. oh and great imagery by the way. |
Great Job on the poem. I love the message conveyed in the poem. However I think you could have cut a few of the I's out of the poem. Divide the structure of the poem up a little to make it easier to read. You have given some very profound thoughts in this write and you have a lot of talent. |