When you love someone

by noha   Mar 19, 2008


When you love someone so deep inside,
It seems like it's so easy to hide.
You've loved him for so very long,
You would think he could do no wrong.

Every day you would hope and pray,
That he would always stay this way.
He treated you like you should be treated,
You thought your life was finally completed.

You thought your love was growing true,
And then one day it was all so blue.
He started putting you down and it hurt,
but you love him and everything to you he meant.

One night he was so sweet to you,
You thought all those things were maybe untrue,
Two days later he was back the same,
You thought you were the one to blame.

this is for you amr i know how much you love me but sometimes i need to feel that always you do, you know my mind or my heart always fight , i love you so much and always you do but girls need to feel it more and more.I love you so deep inside,I need you by my side.
I love you so deep inside,I want to be your guide.

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  • 16 years ago

    by jLegendc

    This is a common poem.. i mean the msg is too common... i think it'd be better if you showed ur emotions by describing them with different words that can really define what u truly feel... but it's good tho.. i wanted this to be great! =]

  • 16 years ago

    by BluEyedMemory

    Honestly this poem almost had me in tears. I loved the reason behind it. I loved the thought with it.
    Great Write
    Emma 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    This poem sounds so sincere, like it's written straight from the heart and I could really feel what you described in every stanza. Beautiful piece, filled with captivating simplicity and the feelings that everyone can relate to.

  • 16 years ago

    by Boy

    Awwwww. i know my words of praise not enough for this poem.. becoz its so well written a complete meaninf, feeling desired love.

    i like your thinking and the choice of words is perfect.

    When you love someone so deep inside,
    It seems like it's so easy to hide.
    You've loved him for so very long,
    You would think he could do no wrong.

    the very first stanza was my favourite stanza... you put great image here.

    alothought i felt a bid sad in toher stanzas.
    maybe this poem realy relates to me. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by khate

    "I love you so deep inside,
    I need you by my side.
    I love you so deep inside,
    I want to be your guide."

    its such a great lines,..5/5

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