Comments : The Unmatched

  • 16 years ago

    by Ical

    This is unusual one, and the two last lines could be a great quote!!! Everything is perfect, just a bit gramatical errors, overall this is still excellent!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Anthony Duvalle

    This is really quite excellent.
    Your rhyming words are amazing and work so well.
    5/5 definetaly

  • 16 years ago

    by Seshochan

    Oh my goddess! you are THE MASTER! never seen a better poem before... :3

  • 16 years ago

    by brokenbutterfly

    Woww you poem is spactacular sound a bit like me......its really good!

  • 16 years ago

    by Confessions

    Woow love the poem..it's exactly how guys like girls to be: sweet,yet respectable. kind, yet strong. pretty,yet prettier on the inside. Nd I agree girls need to show guys such buondaries. It's the impression I dream of giving to all the guys I knw. I'm not really sure what kind of impression I give them,even if they say nice stuff abt me, I wouldn't take it for granted.To them it might just be a flirt or a compliment that they think I'd like to hear nd fall for. I guess it's really hard for a girl to give such an impression.

  • 16 years ago

    by Keath

    Sorry for the late respond!
    The rhyme scheme is hard but you seem to have no problems with it, the poem flows perfectly. It’s almost like a lyric, also because you repeat the first line. I wonder which music would fit. (:
    And a interesting subject of course!