by Ical
This is unusual one, and the two last lines could be a great quote!!! Everything is perfect, just a bit gramatical errors, overall this is still excellent!!! |
This is really quite excellent. |
by Seshochan
Oh my goddess! you are THE MASTER! never seen a better poem before... :3 |
Woww you poem is spactacular sound a bit like me......its really good! |
by Confessions
Woow love the poem..it's exactly how guys like girls to be: sweet,yet respectable. kind, yet strong. pretty,yet prettier on the inside. Nd I agree girls need to show guys such buondaries. It's the impression I dream of giving to all the guys I knw. I'm not really sure what kind of impression I give them,even if they say nice stuff abt me, I wouldn't take it for granted.To them it might just be a flirt or a compliment that they think I'd like to hear nd fall for. I guess it's really hard for a girl to give such an impression. |
by Keath
Sorry for the late respond! |