by FridusBlueheaven Mar 19, 2008
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
Title : Merciless Heart |
by Keath
The poem is okay over all but it contains a lot of grammar mistakes which don’t do any good to the poem. Try to correct them. |
I really likeyour style this poem would make great song lyrics also |
by Blissful
The last line was filled with such emotion and the whole poem reflecting strength and power. The title really captured my eye so I was eager to read more and the poem just fit everything flawlessly. The flow was great and nothing seemed forced while the imagery just blew me away and completed the poem for me. Well done *5/5* |
by sweet escape
Great job.so far this is the one i like the most. 5/5 |
by noha
Nice one , u did hard work, nice feeling 5 /5 |