Under The Radar II

by FridusBlueheaven   Mar 19, 2008


Title : Under The Radar II
Written By : Fridus Blueheaven

Under the radar, being underestimated and mistreated
Life was cold and everything was so damn complicated
My heart was stuck in the middle, it was so intimidated
That's what I used to be but now the souls has integrated

Under the radar, guess now is the time for me to show
I run fast and suddenly I found everything quickly grow
But I'll always remember a little man in the afterglow
Well, that's little me, covered by dust not so long ago

Under the radar, maybe you never know who I am
Far from the crowds, you might never know who this man
Suddenly time goes by and here is where I barely stand
You know me now, I've 'done with all the best I can

Under the radar, but then I believe that it's worth waiting
Suddenly all the dusts turn to gold, once these eyes blink
Well, maybe I have lost everything in order to gain anything
I've been dying before but you'll see that now I'm breathing

Under the radar, in the darkness of they day I'm drowned
It's like I'm the worst thing on earth, cynically they frowned
I've tried to be good, but then lustfully they bring me down
But look at me now and see who's finally got the crown

Under the radar, I've been up and down in this long journey
Been trying to be anything else but then realize it's not me
All the miseries has gone and the pain has turned to history
Slowly but sure, I finally found the right person who to be

2008 Blueheaven Entertainment (c)

0


Did You Like This Poem?

Latest Comments

  • 16 years ago

    by OLA OLUWASEUN

    My goodness it's wonderful. I'll appreciate it if you could comment on my poems too Thanks

  • 16 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    This well written poem is very deep

  • 16 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    I don't know if you are translating to English, but there are many grammar mistakes and forced rhyming in this piece. Maybe your message would be better conveyed in a free verse form.

  • 16 years ago

    by sweet escape

    Great. love the meaning behind the words
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by StonedGooberz

    Your poem is...your rhyming is decent but its knocks down your flow bad other then that its got some good ideas -
    raindrops 5/5