by FridusBlueheaven Mar 19, 2008
category :
Life, society /
inspirational
Title : Under The Radar II |
My goodness it's wonderful. I'll appreciate it if you could comment on my poems too Thanks |
This well written poem is very deep |
by Rachel RTVW
I don't know if you are translating to English, but there are many grammar mistakes and forced rhyming in this piece. Maybe your message would be better conveyed in a free verse form. |
by sweet escape
Great. love the meaning behind the words |
Your poem is...your rhyming is decent but its knocks down your flow bad other then that its got some good ideas - |