Wow, another great poem by you... I really impressed with those simple but meaningful words. Nicely written and smoothly flowed.

It's like I'm the worst thing on earth, cynically they frowned

That lines are most powerful one

You could make it better, the ending could have been better...
But I don't know...
Overall, still 5.5

Well, it is different from Under The Radar you've done before. This is not about love, like the previous one, so those are not related huh???
This is gramatically better than the previous one, but still I love your first UTR. It is flowed very well and very inspiring, I mean this is excellent but the previous one was brilliant!!! Nice writing!!!

I could really feel the power and emotion here which made it an interesting read. I could tell you this came straight from the heart because it was so strong and meaningful. There were places where things didnt make sense and words didnt fit so try reading this one over and revise it a bit more. Well done

Your poem is...your rhyming is decent but its knocks down your flow bad other then that its got some good ideas -
raindrops 5/5

Great. love the meaning behind the words
5/5

I don't know if you are translating to English, but there are many grammar mistakes and forced rhyming in this piece. Maybe your message would be better conveyed in a free verse form.

This well written poem is very deep

My goodness it's wonderful. I'll appreciate it if you could comment on my poems too Thanks