Very thoughtful and seems you're a religious one. I really can relate to this one and the last line is the God all about. Nicely writing, thoughtful. It's brilliant one!!! It makes me inspired to remember my God...

New one i like it , the way u start is interesting

I never gotten really deep into religion but this piece is still good 5/5

Wow, i luv this!

Very very good poem ! i think a lot of people can relate to feeling like this one time or another 5/5 <33

You are good. This poem blew me away, 5/5.

Its the story of my life. Its just in time for Easter too. Beautiful poem. Our God is just so great...but I've been blind to see that and ur poem is helping me to fite agianst the devil and all the wrong things. So thank you.

My favorite
great one

Your poem really touched me. Please keep it up. I'll appreciate it if you could find time to read and comment on my poems too. Thanks

Wow... thats all i can say

This poem is amazing, keep writing!

Wow this poem is really good
i love it && btw God always gives you second chances if you belive in him && recognize that he is your savior you'll be saved that's the whole reason why jesus died at the cross for us. our sins is what seperates us from God but if we break that pact that we have with the world && the devil then we are saved && God will show you the way he did it with me && he is changing my life forever so trust me when i tell you he'll change you from inside out. && if you ever need to talk about anything message me ok. have a good one :)
God bless

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I really like your poem. i hope i can make like that too. i hope you can teach me how to make a poem like that. ehehe... i really appreciate the poem that you made. ihope i can read another poem from you. ehehe...

Dude.. that was such a good poem!!! WE all feel this way. It's got soo much truth in it. Keep up the good work mate.. that was pretty wicked.

Marvellos submission.... A Confession... A Apology to God.... Greaaaatttt.... With Love....007

I enjoyed most of your poems. keep it up buddy ;-)