Elements of Love

by Ben   Mar 19, 2008


Together we will make a start
The rose bud within my chest,
The love flowing in my heart,
Is the same place where our sun sets.

The vines which entangle our hearts,
Flow deep into the soil below,
Foundations forever strong,
Our love will always grow.

As the waves try and break us down,
And the winds keep us apart,
Like the rainbow after the storm,
Our flower blossoms within my heart.

Forever our seeds will grow,
No matter what drought we face,
You are the one, I know,
In my heart, you will always have a place.

©Ben Steinberg 2008-03-07

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  • 16 years ago

    by GoodMorning

    Ben, I do love you so much. This piece is so, so gorgeous. I couldn't resist commenting again! =p Really, love. This one pulls at the heartstrings! Nearly brings tears to my eyes. It just feels so sincere as you're reading.. you know? You can feel the emotions and the authenticity/sincerity. Ah, jeeze. You are so amazing. Ilylaphlp. Always and forever. ;p

  • 16 years ago

    by GoodMorning

    I could hear you reciting this to me
    as I read it. It made it much more personal,
    you know? Ahh. It was nice. =)

    I'd never think up this idea,
    it's so wonderful. So good.

    "The vines which entangle our hearts,
    Flow deep into the soil below,
    Foundations forever strong,
    Our love will always grow."

    ^That's^ my favorite stanza by you.
    Evereverever. It flows so beautifully,
    and the imagery's magnificent.
    I can almost see it in my mind.
    It feels like there's so much heart,
    so many emotions poured into those lines;
    you mean those words so honestly.
    It's good, Ben, real good. =)

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