Haunting whispers

I think i would lock the door at night and leave the light on

Wow. That was creepy. Especially the end when you find out that the voice was your mother. I can sort of relate to this, because I've heard voices whispering in my mind, but I think it was my own voice talking to me if that makes sense. It's really a great story, but I don't see how it's a poem. There really wasn't any kind of flow.

So I guess I did like it, but I would have liked to see more flow. Maybe break it down into stanzas.

Great ending. It's still sending chills down my spine.

Keep writing!
Cayce

I wish I knew who those haunting whispers belonged to,
that sweet voice.

I don't think there needs to be a comma there. All commas do is to create a pause and this one makes the line confusing.

There are a few places where I think there should be a comma.

She laughs and pretends to disappear
but she is just hiding.

There should be a comma before but.

I am in my bathroom
about to take my medicine
and I hear her again.

I think it there should be a comma before about and after medicine.

Other than that it looks pretty good. Sorry if some of the commas you got rid of were already there, but there were some there before that weren't needed. Part of it, is the way you space your words out. Like, when I start reading the next line and it's the end of a sentence, in that brief moment when I'm getting down the next line, there is a pause, making it seem like there should be a comma.

Sixth line, you mean belonged to. Not belong to. This is because the other words you used were past tense.

The only other edit I have is maybe use less commas and more periods. You have commas in some places where they're not really needed.

Wow that ending was spectacular. It was a great poem. It kept me on my feet thinking about what will happen. It was a GREAT twist. I almost thought OCD or schizophrenia. This poem gets a five for sure. I may even add it to my favorites which is saying something considering I don't have any favorites on this site.

O.O robin, i'm loving this poem.
when i was reading it, it kept my attention.
keeping someone's attention is always a good thing. You did great in this poem. No errors that i could see, the way you painted this picture for your viewers to see was just a work of art. you did a spectacular job!