Recipe for insanity

Very good poem, it was rather interesting, great work

Very well done i can also relate

That was very creepy. I get the feeling that your dad was a murder and so he has to hide out from the police, but every night he comes into your room and.. molests you? I think that because of this part:

"holds me tight
touches me in secret places
deep inside."

If anyone finds out what he does to you and tries to stop him, he'll kill them.

It be easier

^^ I think you meant "It would be easier".

You want to be with him, because you love him, but you can because he's on the run.

because he is always on the ran

^^ "ran" should be "run".

This was a very odd poem, but pretty easy to understand unless there's some big metaphor I'm missing.

Overall it was pretty good. Well done.

Keep writing!
Cayce

Nic epoems enjoyed the read very sad and touching,

Wow robin, this poem has great stanza good imagery, you are so good at writing poems, I enjoy reading them as often as i can. I also wanted to thank you for the comments on my poems. I really enjoyed them. As for this poem....KEEP IT UP ^_^ I'm looking forward to reading more and more robin!