I like it
u can definitely feel the pain when u read it and i hope u find happiness in ur life
not sure if u like reading but if u do i would recommend you dont know me by david klass i really think ud like it
good job 4/5 =D

You spoken the true deepest feelings. I cant relate to this penned piece. You wrote it so well, even though it didnt rhyme. Very well art. The structure was well.

5/5

Best wishes,

Sarah xx