Great poem. I have yet to find anything to edit. The rhyming scheme was consistent, which is what I look for in a rhyming poem. I found no capitalization, punctuation, spelling, or grammar errors. Great job. It wasn't a boring poem, it kept me reading. It was unique, with an eye catching title. Overall this is an excellent poem. Five.

I love this poem it reminds me so much of how I feel about my best friend like you just want to reach out and erase all those bad things, wash them gently away