Ohmygosh that almost made me cry, i really want to cheer you up. its a great poem and i loved it |
Wow... what do i say apart from sounding so repeatitive? |
by Asher
That is breath taking, |
by NiRo
Aww you shouldn't die.... |
by Alex
Wow...this hit me hard becuase it seems like you said what ive been wanting to say all my life... this poem is amazing...5/5 love it.. |
by linkhorizon
"I want to stop breathing, |
by Hologram
DayUmmmm ur gud. |
Wow, this was so tragic. i know how you feel. when life just becomes 2 much to handle and it seems as if the only way you can express yourself is through cutting because its like taking some of the pain from the inside and inflicting it on your body. your blood is like all the pain you keep inside pouring out but the thing is that although cutting may help at the time in the long term of things all it really does is ruin your body and leave horrible scars that remind you of the bad times but anyway, i really loved your poem. it was really powerful. keep up the amazing work,, 5/5 |