Comments : Destroy Myself

  • 16 years ago

    by fallenforever

    Ohmygosh that almost made me cry, i really want to cheer you up. its a great poem and i loved it

  • 16 years ago

    by FountainsOfBlood

    Wow... what do i say apart from sounding so repeatitive?
    this is strong. i'm quitting self harm at the moment and this is like exactly how i felt whilst i did.
    this is so accurate and amazing.
    i love you're work and i encourage you to write more.

    5/5 ~ FountainsOfBlood

  • 16 years ago

    by Asher

    That is breath taking,
    ((5))

  • 16 years ago

    by NiRo

    Aww you shouldn't die....
    every time someone dies because of these reasons I cry, for their pain and anger inside of them

  • 16 years ago

    by Alex

    Wow...this hit me hard becuase it seems like you said what ive been wanting to say all my life... this poem is amazing...5/5 love it..

  • 16 years ago

    by linkhorizon

    "I want to stop breathing,
    So you don't have to listen.
    I want to start bleeding,
    And watch my blood glisten."

    i loved the deep, dreary imagery you conveyed in this stanza and throughout. hauntingly beautiful write. 5/5 :)

  • 16 years ago

    by Hologram

    DayUmmmm ur gud.

    just remember if something makes u sad/angry;; dont hurt yourself... cause with that your always the one who comes off worse.

    xx

  • 16 years ago

    by Shellaine shelli

    Wow, this was so tragic. i know how you feel. when life just becomes 2 much to handle and it seems as if the only way you can express yourself is through cutting because its like taking some of the pain from the inside and inflicting it on your body. your blood is like all the pain you keep inside pouring out but the thing is that although cutting may help at the time in the long term of things all it really does is ruin your body and leave horrible scars that remind you of the bad times but anyway, i really loved your poem. it was really powerful. keep up the amazing work,, 5/5