Kiss of death

by Dewy and guido forever   Mar 20, 2008


I have never known the terror that I have seen in your gleaming eyes. you sit shaking, frightened holding me tightly in your grip. As I stare into your eyes
you start to cry. one thing is on your mind, you know you have to let go. you feel me, so cold in your once warm hands. finally you pull my face to yours. this is the kiss of death you've waited for. in a minute your world will spiral deeper down the rabbit hole, and you will be forever lost.

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  • 16 years ago

    by BlueEyedMystery

    Wonderful poem! I really love the imagrey! It brought the poem to life. I liked how it was long lines. It somehow makes it more interesting. My only suggestion is to maybe make the poem as a whole longer. Give the reader more of the story. Anyways, I loved this! Amazing job!

    Keep writing!
    Cayce

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