by Dewy and guido forever Mar 20, 2008
category :
Dark, fantasy /
dark, horror
I have never known the terror that I have seen in your gleaming eyes. you sit shaking, frightened holding me tightly in your grip. As I stare into your eyes |
Wonderful poem! I really love the imagrey! It brought the poem to life. I liked how it was long lines. It somehow makes it more interesting. My only suggestion is to maybe make the poem as a whole longer. Give the reader more of the story. Anyways, I loved this! Amazing job! |