Loves you!

by mumumix   Mar 20, 2008


Things are so special
But not from the start
But If i had my choice We'd never be apart

I love your laugh
and I love your smile
Just to see you i'd walk many a' mile

I want you
and dream of you
and wish you were here
I love you so much my darling dear

Though your many miles away
and you doubt i'll see you again
I know one day I can

I promise this to you my dear
I'm certain I'll see you at least one more time
I'll hug you and kiss you
at this time

Please don't cry don't shed a tear
Just pretend that I am here
I'd hold you tight and you'd hole me
and believe me we'd be happy as can be

You know I love you
With a deep warm fire
You make me so happy
you make me inspired

You are my hero
my batman
But just remeber i'm your greatest fan

{{ <3 I loves you! }}

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  • 16 years ago

    by SpEcIaLmE

    That was sweet and cute.
    the emotion was there but i feel u could have expressed yourself more but i dont know
    i would suggest structuring your stanzas such as make them all 4 lines each this helps the look of the poem and gives it a structure
    the flow was a little off but it wasnt that bad
    overall i give u a 4/5
    great job

  • 16 years ago

    by sweet escape

    But just remeber i'm your greatest fan

    thas very cute and lovey-dovey

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