by tim masson Mar 20, 2008
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
Got up |
It's really hard to go through break ups. [I'm assuming that's what this poem is about]. It will get better though, I promise. Even though this poem didn't rhyme, it had a natural flow to it. I didn't pause while I was reading it at all, and that hard to do with a poem. It was really a great poem! You have a lot of talent! |
by NinjaGirl
This poem is so beautiful 5/5 you have true potential |