Cutting?

by StandStill   Mar 20, 2008


Thick blood
thin tears
a razor blade
piled with fears

can't stop the pain
feel it inside
perhaps with blood
the pain will hide

deep in the heart
a knowledge does rest
the end is so near
release from pain is the best

thick blood keeps on spilling
and these scars i will hide
nobody will know
how or why i died inside

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  • 16 years ago

    by BlueEyedMystery

    Erg. I can relate to this so much, even though I wish I couldn't. Cutting is a horrible, horrible addiction. I've been cut free for about a year though, so I'm pretty proud of myself. I thought that the flow was really good. There weren't any awkward pauses. They rhymes were also good. Overall, I really liked this poem. The only thing I would suggest is to go into more detial and make it longer. It ended wayyy too soon.

    thick blood keeps on spilling
    and these scars i will hide
    nobody will know
    how or why i died inside

    ^^ That stanza hit home so hard. I had to hide my scars all the time. It was not very fun when someone saw one..

    Keep writing!
    Cayce

  • 16 years ago

    by Four Letter Lie

    Amazing poem. i can relli relate... 5/5

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