Amazing poem. i can relli relate... 5/5

Erg. I can relate to this so much, even though I wish I couldn't. Cutting is a horrible, horrible addiction. I've been cut free for about a year though, so I'm pretty proud of myself. I thought that the flow was really good. There weren't any awkward pauses. They rhymes were also good. Overall, I really liked this poem. The only thing I would suggest is to go into more detial and make it longer. It ended wayyy too soon.

thick blood keeps on spilling
and these scars i will hide
nobody will know
how or why i died inside

^^ That stanza hit home so hard. I had to hide my scars all the time. It was not very fun when someone saw one..

Keep writing!
Cayce