I thought this would flow better if this bit:
" that am helpless to resist this spell am under."
was changed too:
"that I'm helpless to resist this spell I'm under."
Other than that i really liked it. Very picturesque you can see it all as you read it.

Im so sorry.

it was well written s i give it a 5/5

Hey,
a nice piece of poetry. the flow was a bit rocky at the end of the poem, loved the subject, I think that some people can relate to it.
great work
kisses stephanie