Wow...
This is absolutely amazing in so many ways, simply beautiful. You have great talent and a way with words. Excellently written piece, so touching and emotional. I especially admire vivid and detailed imagery that you portrayed in each stanza. I like your choice of words and descriptions a lot.
This is one of the most beautiful love poems I've read in a while, and I really can't find anything to critique here. I am honestly in awe, truly amazed.
Keep writing!