by Vincent Thornsberry Mar 20, 2008
category :
Sadness, depression /
grieving, loss
The end |
by PygmyPuff
It does a great job at putting an image in the readers head, however there is no plot or lasting thought about it. its just a poetic phrase. And the last 2 lines having the same word at the end has a negative affect. im not sure what, but it just makes the poem less apealing. |
by Baby Rainbow
Good poem xx |