Comments : The End

  • 16 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Good poem xx

  • 16 years ago

    by PygmyPuff

    It does a great job at putting an image in the readers head, however there is no plot or lasting thought about it. its just a poetic phrase. And the last 2 lines having the same word at the end has a negative affect. im not sure what, but it just makes the poem less apealing.